29A - Venture Concept No.2

 I am offering an opportunity to citizens of the United States to share their opinions and beliefs with legislation in hopes of enacting changes in gun laws. Gun safety laws are necessary, gun violence is getting worse and it needs to end. In the United Sates last year there was nearly one shooting for every single school day. It is time for the United States to enact a change and Create a movement to make sure that the government creates gun safety laws and removes assault rifles from the market and out of people’s homes.  This will ensure the safety of everyone and allow people to always feel safe and not have to worry about themselves or others.

 I want to pursue a group of people who are active protestors and are willing to constantly urge and write to legislation to pass gun bills. These laws will enforce stricter background checks and take assault rifles off the market, and out of people’s homes. This is vital to the safety of the United States of America. In the United States, gun violence is a growing epidemic as the Constitution does not properly address gun safety issues. As technology has advanced, assault rifles were invented and have given children a fear at school previous generations did not have. I believe that nobody should ever feel scared or unsafe at school or anywhere, this is why I think that it is so important that gun safety laws need to be made.

My innovation is going to solve the issue of gun violence and allow people to feel safe when being at school or anywhere. I know that customers will support my idea and want to join me because everyone deserves the right to their own safety and the safety of others. I think that people have realized how much worse gun violence has got throughout the years and a lot of parents are afraid to send their children to school every day because they are worried about the safety of their children. Parents, student and teachers should never have to fear for the lives if themselves or others while being at school. School needs to become a place of safety and a place where students and go to and just learn and not feel scared. This is also necessary for anywhere; people should always feel safe wherever they are and not have to worry about gun violence. Since this is something that the majority of people agree with, a lot of customers and supporters will be attracted to my business. After people join me and realize how necessary gun safety laws are for the United States it will make them continue to stay and want to ensure that the laws are created and that assault rifles are taken. Every single United States citizen deserves the right to feel safe and know that their loved ones are safe too.

The feedback that I received was all positive. Each comment on my first venture concept stated only good things about my post and none of them said anything about what I needed to fix and make better.