Today, there are currently 109 people dying
a day in this country because of gun violence. With these numbers rising each
year, there needs to be something done. I plan to create an organization whose job is to support and finance anti-gun violence activists.
The people involved in these organizations are fighting for change in the
second amendment. Gun laws are needed to protect the citizens of the US. These laws will enforce stricter background checks and take
assault rifles off the market, and out of people’s homes. If enough groups
protesting gun violence rally together, they can overpower the NRA.
Hi Lexington,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your elevator pitch. You made it very professional and spoke very nicely. I believe this pitch is very informing and gives great information on why there should be gun laws and regulations. I like how you made a comparison to how many people are dying because of it because it helps put it into a perspective. Overall great job.
Hey Lexington, great job on this assignment! You made yourself appear very professionally and did a great job. You made yourself sound very knowledgeable and confident and this will help buyers to have confidence in you as well. You gave great information and made great points. Overall you did a really good job with this video. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Lexington,
ReplyDeleteI think this was great! I think that you can definitely see your progression in developing your pitch from Elevator Pitch No. 1. Great job, you were much more confident and clear in what your product is all about. I really don't have any negative comments to give you. Great job!